| "Illumination" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2011 05:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is quite delicious....please update soon. |
Reviewed By: theonlyKer On: June 26, 2011 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, please keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Nenani On: June 25, 2011 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi ^^ I don't have an account, so I hope it is okay to comment like this. Naraku nursing Kagome back to health, well it was the first for me so it was a surprise. He creeped me out with how he still could not feel real emotion. Inuyasha had me so mad with what he did, how he acted. I am glad that you gave him another chance to live life in a different way. Sesshumaru is a strong personality. His silence, objective, desire, honor - it amazes me. Kagome is such a heartfelt character. Always caring. Please update soon. This is a fabulous story. |
Reviewed By: Maite On: June 21, 2011 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw. Adorable story. |
Reviewed By: JohnnysGirl1323 On: June 17, 2011 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am super glad that you updated! Chapter four is such an incredible chapter. The way Sesshomaru is going about the unexpected situation is amazing. He has this strength and grace about it. Damn, to me he has this protectiveness and intellectuality that makes my heart flutter. If only he was real.lol.Johnny probably wouldn't agree. Anyway, I look forward to your update, again. |
Reviewed By: Coffee addict so what On: June 16, 2011 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Baby Inuyasha is a perfect touch to this new romance between Sessh and Kagome. I would love to see more Shippo and Inuyasha interaction, and their own possiveness over Kagome. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: MissingMind On: June 15, 2011 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was such a fantastic chapter. I am very impressed with your skills in this update. I enjoyed everything about it. Chapter is now my favorite as of now. |
Reviewed By: JohnnysGirl1323 On: June 07, 2011 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know that feeling when you finally find a good story and you can't wait to see what happens next? That is how I feel about this story! I am looking forward to the dynamics the characters will find themselves in concerning the situation. I am beyond curious how Sesshumaru will react to Kagome acting nurtruring and caring for Inuyasha. How will Inuyasha feel about his brother? About Kagome, his safety blanket, being with this dominate demon lord who has sharing issues? Will Kagome play with Inuyasha? Rin? Shippo? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: MissingMind On: June 04, 2011 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is interesting. I like the concept. While I do enjoy this story, I must say that some parts of the chapters seemed rushed; I think more thought needed to be expressed concerning Kagome. I don't mean to offend, that is not my intention. I am curious to see more thought on Kagome's emotions growing on what has happened to her. For her to question how could she easily accept Sesshumaru, or how she should handle the new situation with Inuyasha. I look forward to reading your net chapter. |
Reviewed By: Raven Miko heart On: May 19, 2011 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.I have been skimming to find a good story to read and I was upset with the lack of emotion in some. But when I foind this one I was immediately intrigued. I hope you up dare soon. I would like to see where the story goes. |
Reviewed By: NightingaleB On: May 08, 2011 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing read. I have been without reading an Inuyasha fanfic for a few years. But it was my curiosity of how much has progressed in the style pf writings after seeing my mangas that I just had to venture back to a different world. I think that this possibly one of the best stories I have read. What is more surprising is that you have me rooting for Sessh. So, yeah, your pretty awesome. |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2011 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful. It's difficult to describe. You make us sympathetic toward Naraku while reminding us that he is still evil. At the same time, the ambiguous nature of Sesshoumaru's interest remains a mystery. Inuyasha is certainly in character. I don't remember him ever sending a kaze no kizu in Kagome's direction, but it is a possibility. I'm glad you saved Inuyasha and killed off Kikyou. Adding that Kikyou hadn't been virginal was a good touch. I can't imagine that she would have been so good in life if she wasn't in death. It's sad that Naraku can't be saved. His character has such potential. Then again, he's the bad guy, and you can't really save them. I'm glad you posted this over here. This looks to be quite a mental challenge and I hope you continue it. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: GLily On: May 06, 2011 07:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
Another fabulously written story by you! I was a little wary that you would have Kagome begin to love Naraku (which from what I have seen of your writtings is so out of character for you :-P ) so I am happy she realized he would never be a good match for her and that she is considering Sesshomaru. It will be interesting to see what happends with Inuyasha and his gang, as well as how Kagome reacts to Naraku's eventual (making an assumption here) demise now that she has seen a still evil but more humane side of him. Please update soon! |
