| "Hot Summer Nights" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: okieday17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2012 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bow to your mastery of the B/V oneshot. Seriously- I love your longer stories, but your oneshots always leave me all hot and bothered-- in other words, good job!! You give every B/V ff writer something to strive towards. Amazing! |
Reviewed By: JadeWriter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2011 10:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG I love the ending! So unexpected! Hahahahahaha!!!! XD |
Reviewed By: PM On: June 16, 2011 04:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thrilled when I saw you'd written a new B/V, and it didn't disappoint! Your characterisation of them both is perfect and completely believeable, the writing's wonderful, creative and original, and you do erotica like no one else! You've spoilt me when it comes to B/V, seriously, no one writes them like you. I do hope, as others have said, that you continue this, but if not, it's still brilliant as a stand alone one shot. Whatever happens though, you're a treasure to the dbz fandom, and I hope you never leave. ...going to go and have a cold shower...! |
Reviewed By: Stillreadsthesefics On: June 02, 2011 22:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked the premise. Really excellent job, and great prose as usual. Not sure I'm loving the end, to tell you the truth, it felt a bit too sudden and jarring. But keep up the good work, you have got to be the longest standing BV author, it's impressive! |
Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Miarukere On: June 02, 2011 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing skills are on par with the best writers in fiction to date...i enjoyed this from start to finish and the fact that its a one-shot just leaves me fiening for another hit from your fascinating imagination...please keep 'em coming |
Reviewed By: Mos On: May 31, 2011 10:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! Please tell me this a multi-chap fic? I absolutely love your V/B lemons, they're so hot. You definately set the standard in B/V smut! Keep it up, can't wait for more :D (Is that wrong of me? haha) |
Title: ♥
Reviewed By: surmise [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2011 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You always leave me breathless when I read your stuff. It's always a fun read, always delightful and just. Ugh. Your characterization and just. Yes. Amazing. Thanks for this one and please do keep writing! :D |
Title: Good lord...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2011 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great treat!!! Your writing style is the absolute best...I am so greatful that you keep B/V alive! Please keep up the super work in making us smile!!! P.S. This chapter sounds like you could continue it...Bulma is really wanting more!!! ¢¾ |
Title: oh my!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2011 09:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an amazing lemon. I wonder what bulma is plotting next. Never stop writing b/v fics, please. I love your fics. |
Title: WOW!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Roxotaku (not logged in) On: May 29, 2011 09:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG girl! You never lose your touch! You write some of the Hottest Hentai on the Planet! No matter how many times you write Vegeta/Bulma, you never cease to dazzle me, make me hot and bothered! I just want to say, I am your undying fangirl! You have been and always will be an inspiration to me! Thank you! |
