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| "Acantha's Despair" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Hashumba 1985 On: March 05, 2015 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! I can't believe i've never saw this fic until today, I
would've reveiwed the hell out of it. It may be a long shot but I
implore you continue this lemony Diamond. Perhaps post it on
Adultfanfition.net The way you described the sex and sensations,
were all really great. My favourite scene and idea was how you gave
Rei a pregnacy fetish. It works so well with her, and is very hot
to read about. I'd love to see much much more about Rei exploring
her pregnacy fetish. Maybe someting where she goes off to secretly
search for creatures who'll give her their spawn and use her like a
birthing brood mother. And maybe she goes too far, as her body
changes becoming more inhuman and swollen with eggs. And she loses
herself in pleasure as she becomes a queen brood mother, for sole
purpose of birthing and sustaining the creatures young. I hope this
reveiw finds youand inspires you to continue this story. Post it on
adultfanfiction.net if you can. You'll probably get more feedback
that way. Hope to see you there.
| Reviewed By: Sans-Normal On: February 06, 2015 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has a lot. Trans, futa, tentacles, monster, drugs,
S&M, beast(demonic), gangbang, egg laying, lactation,
humiliation, mind bending, and probably more that I can't remember
right now. Even with all of that thrown in there it has plot,
background, and character development. All of which is good besides
just the wanton sex, although that's good to. The only thing
missing is an ending. Personally I feel that two things need to be
resolved before this story can be called complete. First, how does
the six day "trial" end. How does Shinji's new summon play into the
group? I assume from the small blurb involving the outside world
that an Angel might be involved, possible Ireul. Does this keep the
group from leaving ala SAO? Inquiring minds, at least this one,
want to know. Second, how does the pilots and friends time in the
game effect their real lives. Is Asuka more in touch with her soft
side? Does Rei turn into a sex fiend? Does Shinji get a full sex
change via Dr. Akagi? Heck just ending it on that last one would be
amazing, and a good mind-fuck. If you can continue this, please do.
There's too much possible good story left hanging out there not to.
And we can't forget about all the possible sexual situations that
can pop up.
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