| "Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Princess Timbrel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2012 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
He was a 21 year old having sexual fantasies about his 13 year old sister. Bulma is explainable she was a child with a crush on someone she idolized and trusted exploring natural curiosity while he was well past adulthood. |
Reviewed By: future author On: November 11, 2011 11:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story.. hope you come out with the epilogue soon... |
Reviewed By: tina84 On: July 02, 2011 14:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
You are going to update this story, right? |
Reviewed By: tmcat On: June 23, 2011 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and write more already...LOL |
Reviewed By: tmcat On: June 22, 2011 05:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story...write more soon, okay? |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2011 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I've read this fic on ff.net. Is this the same version or is this an unedited version? BTW, I love this fic. It is very different from the rest of the b/v fics out there. |
