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| "Evening scores." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: NaVaJo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2012 06:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love these to so much...cant wait for more. | Title: Hayden is off the Chain!!!
Reviewed By: Androgynous Angel On: June 08, 2011 10:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
As always you have delivered another piece of awesome-ness! Which is just awesome because I know you've been having a lot of stuff going on in your life and yet you still take the time and give us the good stuff. I do have to say I LOL'd at the name of the characters especially cause my name is Tristian, and I'm black but alas I'm not a dude even though I'm always getting mistaken for one if I don't do a bunch of stuff to make my self look girly, hence the name Androgynous Angel but yeah. I grew up in DC my older brother was just like Tristan getting a bunch of our cousins and the kids we grew up together and just forming a little gang which is named after their go-go band Prodigy. But I digress I absolutely loved the characters especially Hayden with his bad ass self. And Mitchell who I guess isn't all that bad a dude just Tristan doesn't know him too well? But this was great loved it loved it loved it. I'm not sure if you've updated it's my life but this has definitely tied me over until you do, or I guess until I go read it if you've updated it already. Anyways I've rambled a lil bit too much. Ta! And keep yo head up and the wonderful work! -Angel | Title: Love it as usual
Reviewed By: Wigi00 On: June 07, 2011 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say i love this couple best I think, the sex scene was really hot and I liked the dropped hints of Tristan's past. I really would like to hear more of his past and who died. I wonder how this would affect Hayden and if any of Tristan's past would come back to haunt him, like somebody from his crew or something. |
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