| "How Love Brought Us Together" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Miffinmini [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2011 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chapter.Great story hope you update soon.good luck writing for chapter three not that you need it your a great author=) |
Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Vegetalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2011 17:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm workin on it right now so it might be posted up real soon!!!!!!! Thanks for enjoying it!!!!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2011 19:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great beginning. I'm looking forward to more. the only part that was confusing was when Bulma was talking about the fever. Can't wait to see chapter 3! |
