| "Night of the New Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: fhrugnurogvio On: March 13, 2005 07:22 CST
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I enjoyed this fic alot babe, good job in the creativity front! One thing though, each person speaking is a seperate paragraph. You tend to group them together, and that's bad grammar. Basically it's like: "But Hee-chan, Altron would look great with a pink and orange color scheme! Pleeease?" Duo wailed. "No." Heero said firmly. "But Wu put whipped creme in my shoes!" "No." "If you could just look away and not tell him-" "No." "Neon is pretty, Wu-bear would love-" "I said no!" See what I mean? That's my only complaint! Otherwise, I give you a 9!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 21:57 CST
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Correction creativity is a 10!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEA!! My fav yaoic (is that a word) coupl Duo and hee-chan!!!! what a story, so sweet and it kept me wanting to read the story to completion, and not wait until the next time I could get to the computer (yawns...) This was a great story!! thank you very much for sharing your creavity ... your talent. Please continue writing.
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Title: night of the new moon
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAA!!! What a story and what an interesting ending!!! Domo Arigato!!! Thank you so much Lotus-chan!!! looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Sanam On: March 04, 2004 16:56 CST
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Good work!I enjoyed it very much.
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Reviewed By: Shu On: March 02, 2004 21:38 CST
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Wow. I read this the whole way through and it was a nice story! Very enjoyable. I'll have to keep an eye out for more of your works! Nice ending, too. ^^
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Reviewed By: Destinys Lot On: February 12, 2004 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good wish you had finished though. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Serena On: December 18, 2001 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is certainly one nicely done-up story! I hope the next chapter gets posted soon...wonder what will happen to Duo in the end, I hope he can stay with Heero. Wufei being skeptical had me laughing. And about Selena, I hope she get banished or toasted in the best possible and painful way! Relena's starting to get on my nerves too!
Please post the next part soon......and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: NA On: November 24, 2001 00:03 CST
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It's so interesting Hope for the ending to be shown soon |
Reviewed By: Heero lover On: November 16, 2001 19:38 CST
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Hey,
I am really enjoying your fanfic. It totally rules!!!. Can't wait 'till the end. Well gotta start reading. Im glad they're soooooooooo long!.
Bye :P. |
Reviewed By: Wildfire's Flame On: November 17, 2001 23:26 CST
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Hey there!! I am so loving this story very much but I have one question. At the end of chapter five it has Heero running off to save Wufei from Selena and then the next chapter is Relena showing up. What Happened? Is there like a chapter missing or what? I want to know what happened to the bad ghost. And I want toi know what little miss pacifist is going to do. Grins. Totally kawaii story. May I archive it? Onegai? Here's a link to my site. www.angelfire.com/gundam/RoninWarriors and you can email me at bhollan2@hotmail.com. Arigatou Lena |
Reviewed By: Nightshadow On: November 18, 2001 16:32 CST
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I love this fic!!!!!! Its so sweet and angsty at the same time! And did Selena do something to Wufei? Is Duo coming closer to actual life the more time he spends with Heero? Ack! Relena's got Selena's diary! Oh no! Please write back! And when's the next pt gonna be out? Hopefully soon!!!!!! I love these long chs!!! nightingale_t2@yahoo.com |
