Reviewed By: jerin On: June 29, 2011 06:30 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: excellent story the you spun the story around was a great idea now i only have one thing left to say to you i want more please continue this story.