Reviewed By:Kitsune1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2011 03:52 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: I think you have a great plot here, I really hope that despite anythig you finish this. If you want more people reading this you can go to fanfiction.net, there are more readers than here.