| "Against All Odds" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear...his beads broke....that does not bode well for Kagome. |
Reviewed By: DemonInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh, Please please finish this story! and i wish i could give you 1000 on the enjoyment factor. |
Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: July 08, 2011 11:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Today's topic: Did the infant slam IY out of the miasma to kill him or did he do it to save him from being slowly poisoned.....hmmmmmmm |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2011 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, to be fair Inuyasha did almost transform, LOL. It was the infant's arrival at that moment that stopped Inuyasha from losing his mind, ultimately saving Inuyasha's life if Naraku truly was going to kill him once he lost it. It was the infant that stopped Naraku from killing Kagome (PS, totally fucked up of Naraku to give Kagome her sanity back right at that moment, brilliant!) and it was the infant that lifted Inuyasha and slammed him back, 'tearing through' the wall of miasma, eh? Yes, sucks that he's in excruciating pain, but no pain no gain. Is Inuyasha going to emerge on the other side of the prison? I wouldn't mind the baby living if it turned out that despite being Naraku's spawn, it turns against him just like all of his off-chutes always did, and as Kagome's child it has a sense of right and wrong. But I suppose it's too early to tell just what is going through that one-minute-old's head. Can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: July 08, 2011 07:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Mkay! So Kagome gets to live! I was thinking, well doesn't the infant need breast milk? Or was he like so evil he ate raw meat? Haha. So what will happen to the rest of them now...? I feel like the baby has more surprises up it's sleeve. Hmmm. Till next time, can't wait! Great chapter! |
Title: Aka: Lunabell
Reviewed By: punkie123 On: July 08, 2011 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohnoohnoohnoohnoohno!!!! Please don't let Inuyasha die!!!! MY GOD this is a wonderful story!!! I'll Login next time. But you have one heck of a great story here. I love it. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: July 07, 2011 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Damn! OH DAMN! What a chapter! I just keep thinking to myself, how is this story going to end?? I can't wait to see what happends in the next chapter. Update soon please! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 10:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bum Bum BUM... somebody should have told Naraku to be careful what he wished for, LOL. I know he was trying to push Inuyasha over the edge, stupid Naraku thinks that Inuyasha will be easier to kill when his mind his gone, that his own lack of control and inability to think will ultimately lead to his own demise, but has Naraku ever actually faced off against full-youkai Inuyasha? He has no idea what he's up against, because this time Inuyasha isn't just trying to save his own life, it's revenge for what Naraku did to Kagome. Naraku doesn't stand a snowball's chance in hell. BUT there are still a lot of unknowns, like will Kagome come back to herself? And what of the baby? Oh! Super looking forward to the next update! |
Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: July 07, 2011 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tory, all your fan fics are great - this one especially. I have my fingers crossed that they're all actually under a spell (like the eps when they were trapped by that demon in the poppy field) and that it all works out in the end for IY and Kagome. Although, I have to wonder if Kagome possesses some miko powers, why can't she purify the baby into being fully human so Naraku can't use him as a rechargable battery? Can't wait for the next chap! |
Reviewed By: Immoral T On: July 07, 2011 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOW! You are amazing! How do you think of stuff like that?? This story had me from the first chapter and like I was sitting up straight until I reached the end of what was posted! I was never bored and I found your Naraku character to be surprisingly constant and easy to understand. Despite being so evil he is a well developed character. So are Kagome and especially Inuyasha. You don't find a lot of that here. Just a wonderful plot and...well you see my ratings. I hope that You update soon!!! |
Title: Aka: Lunabell
Reviewed By: punkie123 On: July 07, 2011 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the shit hit the fan....I just hope EVERYONE (except Naraku) comes out of this alive. |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And then came Full Blood InuYasha. Should be most interesting. ;) |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And then came Full Blood InuYasha. Should be most interesting. ;) |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2011 19:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Finally buggered up the courage to read this fic and it was awesome! Can't say that I like the little part when Naraku raped Kagome, but was to be expected because I know that it will contribute to the story later. (; Will not be too good if it was an easy happy ending eh? Lol. I love how you wrote the story so far, and how you make the situations so detailed. Your stories are always awesome. Looking forward to more. |
Title: Aka: Lunabell
Reviewed By: punkie123 On: July 06, 2011 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy....The shit is going to hit the fan and BOY is Inuyasha going to be enraged!! |
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