Reviewed By: 97649753 On: August 14, 2011 18:47 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Very interesting so far, I'm almost a little sad that they're leaving for another dimension and won't find out what happened. Maybe Miyo will tell us? Maybe they'll find out more in their journey to the cave? Please keep writing.