Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2011 03:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
I see you got the formatting fixed! Glad I could help. Also, HILARIOUS! I hope Inuyasha and Kagome bicker more in the future, it's too much fun to have a romance start out with fighting isn't it? Also, loved their banter in the paring lot. Good job so far. A word of advice, you might want to try writing your chapters in advance. It really helps keeping the writer's block at bay. Hope for more, it was fun. |
