| "A Poke'master's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Moongirl On: January 11, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Ow, my God this is the best fanfic ever that I read
of pokemon! You have, no must, write another chapter soon.
I will be back! I Love IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dogsc16 On: December 05, 2002 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ithought it was great maybe u can write more because i can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: gary hater On: October 18, 2002 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz make the next chapter.
THis story was good
BUT WHY DID IT HAVE TO BE GARY!!!
I HATE GARY!!!!
I think if you work hard the stiry will be come the best of all the storys here |
Reviewed By: GohanSj3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEP! u have 2 continue!! and i mean fast! this is a very good fic idea and i can't wait until u post some more chappies! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is not bad. But you should continue because it was starting to get better. You also didn't make a lot of mistakes. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: RadicalDreamer On: April 09, 2002 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
really nice story, i like it a lot...could u plz finish it! i've never heard of a 8 month writers block!! if you made the story so great so far, i'm sure u can think of something!! it'll turn out great completed!!! |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: November 28, 2001 02:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I really lioke this fanfic. Plz finish it really soon, I can't wait to see what happens next... |
Reviewed By: Terry On: November 26, 2001 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why dont have Rick,Gary,or make up your
own character. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: PreventorFire On: September 02, 2001 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute story, for once I have respect for Ash (he grew brains!) I am anxious to see the rest. Please say he at least goes to visit Tracey too and maybe a run in with Gary or Team Rocket? (sorry those three are my favorite characters!) |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 06, 2001 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
You said that Misty saw all of Ash's battle's on TV right? if Misty saw all of his battles, why couldn't she recognize him when he battled her? Anyway, i think your story is great! i liked it a lot! i was just a bit annoyed with that last part. Anyway, keep on going! it's a great story! can't wait to hear about the crystal league! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 06, 2001 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
You said that Misty saw all of Ash's battle's on TV right? if Misty saw all of his battles, why couldn't she recognize him when he battled her? Anyway, i think your story is great! i liked it a lot! i was just a bit annoyed with that last part. Anyway, keep on going! it's a great story! can't wait to hear about the crystal league! |
