| "After The Moment With You:" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Hi!!!
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2013 15:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
I loooooooooooooved your fic!!! It's great!!! even after all the warming up in a cabin in the woods fic that exist out there I hadn't read one like this!!! I loved the way you made Inuyasha act xD Nad i love the way you have Kagome to be in hing school and still looking for the shards and stuff xD I loved it xD I am very curios about the information myoga had for the group xD but I guess I will have to wait I would just need to be content with what we have right now xD I LOVED your fic and I hope you can contiue soon xD take care tooons of good luck xD |
Reviewed By: jj234 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2011 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving it!! haha! When Kagome woke up and saw Inuyasha under her >.< HILARIOUS! Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: ExodusAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2011 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE THIS ASAP!!! I wanna know what happens next O.O. This is really good!! =D great job so far!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2011 10:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
alright, so aside from the grammer issues you already have pointed out yourself, you have some really LONG paragraphs, now I like long paragraphs but it can be hard to follow on a computer screen :( and can I suggest that you consider maybe putting thoughts in italics or something? Other than those things I am enjoying this fic immensely. This is honestly the first fic I've read where Kikyou is involved and she's not either 1) dying again or 2) an evil biznatch, I have to admit that it threw me for a loop, I would love to know what happened to make her rethink her position on InuYasha and Kagome considering everything. I hope you don't go straight to a lemon in the second chapter, you have the perfect super hilarious embarrasment for life moment set up here and just thinking about those two trying to work through that AND the Kikyou encounter while finding the missing shards is getting me all happily looking forward to the rest! OK, OK... I know... I go on... I just rarely get to catch a good fic from the beginning and I think I might be getting a little too excited.. no more caffiene for me today.... OMG! what if Miroku and Shippou found them the next morning!! ROTFLMAO ok ok.. can't breathe... |
