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| "Flames of Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2011 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was pretty funny. Well written, a good life threatening situation, and a daring rescue with a sweet moment. I really like the ending with her friends hounding them with questions. I suppose I would of reacted in a similar way if I survived a fire like that. Nicely done. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2011 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, good analogy, all things considered. Still, it's much better to have to figure out how to tell her friends the truth than for the four of them to be burned to a crisp. It's a good thing Inuyasha was following her! Nice job. :-) |
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