| "I Am Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkestofDreams On: August 06, 2011 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Enjoyed the fresh concept of this story. Definitely see potential in it and will look out for future chapters. |
Reviewed By: red-letter On: August 04, 2011 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story seems to have potential. Unfortunately I couldn’t get past the first few sentences without cringing. You really should consider taking this down and editing it before reposting. Right now it's a jumbled mess that very few will bother to even read. I'm not saying this to be mean, but honest. |
