"Dark Side" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: mamosere On: April 19, 2012 08:20 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: For a dark fic, this is really good. I do like it. I also enjoyed reading this even though it's not romantic at all. All i can say is your also good at writing dark fiction, love the ending. | Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2011 02:23 EDT Comment/Review: Wow. It was dark, but at the end, I couldn't help saying,"Awww..." I don't know how you did it, but you managed to have me feeling two different emotions in just a matter of moments. You are truly amazing. ;D | Title: I think I'm going to have nightmares after this. Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2011 06:30 EDT Comment/Review: I must confess, I couldn't handle it. The writting was wonderful, but the subject matter, even with the ending, I just couldn't stomach it. | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: August 07, 2011 01:28 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Freakin mmmm! As I got closer to the end I totally forgot there was supposed to be a happy ending, ugh! That's one hell of a story you got there. And the very end with Sango, Miroku and the rest was disturbing. It was like a, oh it would have happend, type of reaction for me. Good story...in spite of the dark parts. XD | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2011 00:13 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. If I hadn't read the summary and then your author's note about it having a light ending I might have stopped reading. I'm glad I didn't. Despite it being a bit darker and more gruesome for my tastes I did like this one. So was it Kagome's wish that Inuyasha learn to accept being a hanyou that caused the vision, or did those events really happen and the jewel granted his wish to go back to the moment before making his wish, or some combination? Actually it could be any of them, they all work really well. I think you did a great job with this. And while I think you ended it in a good place, I can't help but feel a bit disappointed that Inuyasha didn't at least hug Kagome or something to express his relief that she was alive. | Reviewed By: White Luna(nsi) On: August 07, 2011 00:03 EDT Comment/Review: Very interesting short one shot... Very good. |
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