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| "Mates" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: mystmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2011 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I liked how stilted Kagome seemed at the beginning. And I wasn't expecting the death, but it fit. The Sesh loves her in secret isn't my thing, but it worked. And what papa said at the end was funny. I think there was a typo in the disclaimer though.. "I do now own" should probably read "I do not own". Overall, good job :) | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2011 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was different from how I originally expected based on the summary, though I will admit it, I'm a naughty girl because I peaked at your other review prior to reading. Once I saw what inuyashaloverr wrote, enlightening me to a character-death I hadn't been aware of, but also the fact that he comes back to life, I knew I had to read it - I was especially curious to see what InuPapa had to say at the end, and I agree, that was funny! All in all, great job! :-) | Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2011 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, now that was different. Not good with charter death, never have been, so was happy much when he came back, hehe. :D But made me lmao on the little ditty their father had to say at the end. That was great, lol. ;) |
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