Title: Great story! Reviewed By: RedByakugan On: October 01, 2011 14:50 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Keep up the great work! I love the story already! It's suspenseful (obvious, of course, but not too obvious) and you throw in some random parts for each character that really gives the plot some realism. ;) Hope to read more! |