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| "You left your mark on me." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2012 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so worth the wait! I'm thrilled that you have gifted us with a fitting ending to a very original retelling of a canon story. I couldn't stop reading long enough to review after each chapter, and, for that I do apologize. Just know, however, that it was the way this fanfic was structured and woven together, along with proper spelling, that made it a worthwhile read. I look forward to any other offerings that you would be so kind to share with your avid fans. | Title: My 2 cents......
Reviewed By: X0oBuffyo0X [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 08:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The storyline seems to stick to the series well, but it just seems short. Each chapter is short. Like, when I'm reading it, I feel like it ended too soon and I wished there was more I could read. Good job on the writing though! I just wish the chapters wouldn't have been so short... :( (^.~)" | Reviewed By: Rogues Masquerade On: September 06, 2011 00:58 EDT
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Good work! i definitely appreciate the quick updates! | Reviewed By: Rogues Masquerade On: September 02, 2011 00:01 EDT
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The characters are a little OOC especially vegeta for the time frame but for the concept it definitely works, I personally would like longer chapters but with the exception of a few grammatical errors this is a very entertaining story, keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter! =) | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2011 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon:) |
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