| "The Nature of Change" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Kesuna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2013 19:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best fics I have ever read overall. The story was detailed and well put together and the plot was perfect! |
Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2012 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never write reviews because I don't feel I'm qualified to judge others writing, but after reading "The Nature of Change" I felt I had to comment. I have just finished Thursday-Tuesday night and am hooked, blown away, delighted, and completely IN LOVE with this story! It's amazing! Your writeing style is so natural and human. I felt so much of K and Sess's individual suffering. I have always liked stories that focus on Kagome after Naruko's defeat and she being trapped in the future. I truly didn't know what to expect when I started the story but after two chapters I knew I was reading something truly special. And just two more compliments, if I may; 1) when Ses told K about Inuyasha's death I cried. I never cry! and 2) your lemon was magic! I know you stated that there would be more chapters, and I sincerly hope thare are, but even if you decide to end it here the story feels wonderfully complete. Bravo m'lady, bravo! (I also agree with everything VenusLegacy said!) |
Title: Continue! Continue!
Reviewed By: Addict91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2012 09:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed your story from the beginning and hope you continue it when you have time. Thanks for a great one! |
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2012 23:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. You've definitely brought the characters to life. I can so relate to Kagome and I love how realistic you've made her. I cant wait to read more and I hope you update soon :D |
Reviewed By: dei purple On: June 21, 2012 05:14 EDT
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Up til this last chapter i read i kept thinking that maybe sesshy would somehow end up bringing to meet inuyasha at some point....guess i am a inu / kags girl, but wow never cried so much. This is a great story but sad too. Cant wait to read more |
Reviewed By: Tusuke Kounami On: June 15, 2012 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fix is truly... endearing. Kagome reminds me of myself in some ways. I look forward to your update. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2012 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! please update!! |
Title: sessh love
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2012 16:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
Also, just wanted to add that I like the way he now calls her by her first name, he has moved from saying 'Miko' to 'Kagome' You really are showing how their relationship develops, the dialogue and conversations we can really see this. she's so lucky lol |
Title: ch 5 and everything
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2012 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh i am sooooo hooked on this, i love the characterisations and the way you write their connection, ah Sesshomaru is just perfect, and I like the way they have their teasing banter, the way they flirt. The growing bond between the two feels natural, i feel so immersed in the world you have created and I am completely absorbed in your tale. I don't normally like sess/kag fics, i usually try and then stop after the first chapters; but this story I have read it from beginning to end. Usually i don't read them as I am never happy with the characterisation of Sesshomaru and the way they handle Kagome not being with inuyasha, but your depiction is very well written, I don't doubt your universe, and I really love watching them together. The dialogue as well and the text conversations, ah man I seriously need more of this story pweeeeze |
Reviewed By: Lady_Minokee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2012 22:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story and how the characters have changed since the feudal era... wonderful... can't wait to read more |
Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2011 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story already and it's only been two chapters. You should post this on Dokuga, I think a lot of Sess/Kag fans would like it. |
Title: New Fav!
Reviewed By: twistedf8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2011 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok so I finally stopped passing by this story and started to read it and I've got to say this is one of my new favorites...lol... I cracked up laughing at the little banter you came up with through their texting. It was hilarious. I can't wait to see more! |
Reviewed By: kara-chan On: September 01, 2011 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are really talented here... i was laughing my ass off... good mixture between intensity and comedy Please post more!!! |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2011 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very nicely done. And oneshot you say, when there's room for so much more? Hehe. I really liked how this came out. Thanks for sharing! ;) |
