| "Paralyzer" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kirr1001 On: February 26, 2012 13:11 EST
Comment/Review:
oh, how can Kagome be so understanding? I adored her in this! good one-shot |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2011 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great one and original too, like you said, I've never seen it done before. I am continuously amazed by your ability to place Inuyasha and Kagome in situations not covered in canon and have them remain in character, making it seem like something that could have happened. Excellent work as always and I look forward to whatever you come up with next. (As fall is quickly approaching I can't help but wonder if you will be doing another Halloween fic and if so what you will come up with this time. I'm sure it will be amazing.) |
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2011 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story by a great author! I loved the concept of Inuyasha being paralyzed. It's definitely something I've never come across before, and I've read a LOT of fanfiction! |
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2011 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this - another winner from one of my favorite authors. Amber |
Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: September 03, 2011 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just happened upon you yesterday and I must say that I have greatly enjoyed your stories. (I've already read several.) Your writing is superb, your characterization is excellent, and your lemons are very steamy. (And those are just the ff.net lemons.) You treat the characters respectfully; Kagome is young and emotional, but also strong and self sacrificing. Inuyasha is brash and rude, but also loyal, loving, and honorable. Miroku, Sango, and Shippo while not the focus of your stories are given more than the one dimensional one liners most authors usually toss them. Even early Kikyo is given more respect than most authors ever gave her. While I'm not usually a fan of "Inu Mating Rituals", at least you make sure they talk about it *before* doing anything. (As opposed to many authors who turn it into an aside the day after.. btw you're permanently bound to me, if you ever sleep with anybody else we'll both die, and you're going to live a couple hundred years.) This particular story is my favorite thus far, but that's just cause it's fun seeing Inu not 100% in control of things. I love your originality. For all the 100k+ stories out there, most are pretty much the same few plots. I've only see one story even similar to this one, and that was years ago. Kudos to you for your excellent writing! |
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat On: September 02, 2011 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sometimes the things that bring us closer to those we love are the things we usually don't think about. And this was a perfect example of it! Any of us can picture themselves in a situation like that and not too many would know if they could deal with it the way Inuyasha & Kagome did. +-+-+ Thank you for continuing to write and share with us! |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2011 17:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
ya gotta do what ya gotta do -- i believe that she's got the ability in canon to step up and do what you had her do in this story, aside from the regular teen angst and insecurities she's a pretty mature girl. great story! ~gin |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2011 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... liked it... funny and sweet moments between kagome and inuyasha... good job... great work! |
