"Complete Report: Subjects 01-05" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: ? Reviewed By: teacup On: September 20, 2011 15:02 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought this had a lot of potential but it was nothing but stats. You could have written chapters and had the findings at the end. It was easy to tell who was who, some I disagree'd with but thats just personal opinion. Looking forward to reading your fics, I just wasnt into this one. Sorry if I caused offence | Title: Chapter 1 Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2011 18:15 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: By far the most interesting read-between-the-lines fic I've ever read. I found the format believable, and the build-up of personalities easy to pick out. Quite a few good curve-balls as well, and fun to see the different High and Low scores to the different measurements. Especially the Wufei ones, since this is set before his major BSoDs. This fic rules. Is "experimentation" as ominous as it looks? |
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