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| "His Wedding Night" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: goldbutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2012 05:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this so much, so i hope you continue. my favorite pairing is madara x natsume. but matoba x natsume gets me excited too! it's like a very delicious side dish! while madara x natsume is the main course! also the sex scene is very hot and refreshing! I enjoyed the story and is looking forward to it! | Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Grisia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is .... amazingly nice ! I really love the way Natsume gets raped *drools* I can just imagine how he's panting and moaning away, their positions... Everything. Your descriptions are perfect and I would really like for you to continue. I'm curious to what will happen. Are you not going to continue your work? Please do :) . I read your work at this website and at fanfiction.net website LOL. *grins* Thank you for writing this and making me have massive nosebleeds and an unstoppable lip-licking experience *takes tissue*. |
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