"Saiyan Obligation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2012 05:41 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love the way you write beautiful story now to read the 2nd part....keep up all of your great writing |
Reviewed By: skinnychick On: February 07, 2012 15:59 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fic! I felt bad for Bulma at the end of this fic. Now, on to the sequel. |
Reviewed By: 465432 On: December 31, 2011 15:32 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I love the ending! I think you would benefit from having someone proofread for you. I've really only given you poor marks for careless errors. Keep on writing! |