| "The Second Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2011 22:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow! That was creepy and sad, but I'm not sorry for Sesshoumaru at all. He deserved it. Also, I wanted to ask how you got your italics to work. My work around with rtf files no longer works for me. Can you tell me what version of Windows you use and what editor and what document extension you use? Thanks! Just PM me if you can. |
Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2011 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I've gotta say is wow...that was so sad...and beautiful at the same time. And for some reason the only way I can think to put this is, my heart goes out to kagome :P , that was a sorrowful ending for her and sesshy but like I said beautifully written. Thank you kanna37 for always delivering and never dissapointing a reader ^^ hope to see more of your writting in the future , I'm looking forward to it :) |
Reviewed By: Ayupan On: October 21, 2011 10:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... I'm at loss of words. Really great story! |
