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| "Silver Fang" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] | Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2014 01:18 EDT
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I'm not sure I ever read that one before. I think I would've
remembered it if I had. I enjoyed it much more than I expected (AUs
aren't really my forte). But it's a great story, and you're right -
the sex was rough, but hot. I was also impressed by the
choreography in the fight scenes; I can tell you put a lot of time
into visualizing the moves down to the smallest details. The fact
that they both possess supernatural abilities (and varying decrees
of nudity) throughout just made the 'sparring' that much more
interesting. I'll definitely be reading the sequel soon, and
looking forward to part 3 even more now.
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Midnight Cat On: October 30, 2012 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Another wonderful example of why you continue to be one of the favorite writers of the fandom! Perfect for Halloween and a real treat without having to do a trick! Happy Halloween to you, and may handsome vampires with silver hair come from the shadows to play! | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 23:24 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2012 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups. yahoo.com/group /Feudal Association/ Our website is located here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net/ feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net/ feudal/winners /2012-2/march- 2012/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net /feudal/gallery /thumbnails.php? album=102 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery /index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal –pulpfiction .net/feudal /gallery /thumbnails.php ?album=102 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 23:23 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2012 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups. yahoo.com/group /Feudal Association/ Our website is located here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net/ feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net/ feudal/winners /2012-2/march- 2012/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net /feudal/gallery /thumbnails.php? album=102 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal- pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery /index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal –pulpfiction .net/feudal /gallery /thumbnails.php ?album=102 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Reviewed By: mamosere On: April 17, 2012 08:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story before but i never left a review so i would like to correct my oversight. I just like you to know that as always i enjoyed reading your story and i really appreciate how great a writer you are, truth is i don't usually write a review but i really want you to know that i love all of your works that i have read. Hope you do more InuKag story. | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2012 00:42 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Title: Absolutely breathtaking
Reviewed By: midnightair02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2012 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You story was by far one of the best I've read on this site. I will admit that closer to the end I was so into the story that when I saw that Kagome was about to die and Inuyasha was willing to die with her, I started to tear up and almost cried. I believe that these stories are the best. I love the stories that evoke an emotional reaction from the reader. This is when I believe that an author has done their job. They were able to write out their story so well that it's almost as if you knew the characters. You are a truly brilliant writer and I'm certainly glad I took the time out to read this. I don't write reviews for just anyone, but I truly felt that I needed to get this out to you. Keep writing, and I wish you well! (: | Reviewed By: 3lue3utterfly On: December 29, 2011 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story. I love the idea of Inuyasha vampire fics and I'm currently writing one of my own. There aren't many out there that I've seen so I'm glad I came across this one. It was very well written and the fight scenes were very engaging. I got a bit confused about the breeding part though, but overall I enjoyed the lemon. Would you by any chance do a follow up? I'm sure I'm not the only one whose interested to know what happens with Kagome and Inuyasha after she leaves the werewolves. :) | Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2011 09:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again, not only is this a great story, I couldn't tear myself away to do chores, (hopefully my husband will understand). But in any case you have proven time and time again how talented you really are. Thank you for continuing to entertain with your vision. | Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i've read some inuyasha vampire fanfiction before, but this was simply the best one i've ever read. I loved the concept, interactions and even the fight scene was really well put together; It flowed, was easy to follow and gave a good image of what was happening without becoming confusing or having to re-read it to understand what happened. So many fics out there have fight scenes but not even a fraction of them are as well put together like this one did. Mad points for accomplishing it, for i know how hard it really is. Towards the end i was dreading to read this, in a good way, because of how things were turning out but i am glad to how it all ended. I really wish you would write more chapters into this because it has every ingredient to being a fantastic multi-chapter story. The only thing that left me a bit wanting for more was the climax part of the lemon scene... compared to some of your other fics, the actually climax didn't have much detail or graphic description, leaving me feeling that it was rushed out. But that is just my personal grievance, you have your style of writing things and i have no intention of telling you how to do it. Other than that, this was a well made, all-around encompasing story that reeled me in and kept me hyped, interested and fully desiring for more until the very end. I also loved how you described the differences between vampires and werewolves. You kick ass, and never let anyone tell you otherwise. Hope to read more soon! | Reviewed By: thegreatangsthaterfanfictionnet On: October 30, 2011 07:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I didn't think I would actually enjoy a story where Kagome was a werewolf mostly because I thought you wouldn't be able to pull it off. I mean Inuyasha the vampire has been done a million times but Kagome the werewolf? I've never seen that. You totally rocked it and I like the idea of her being able to transform. But I have one concern. Your story had certain sentences that might be taken to mean that rape is sexy. Its not. I feel really strongly about this. Inuyasha was thinking of raping Kagome and actually even THINKING of raping a woman for whatever reason (she's ''strong'' or a ''challenge'' or to ''subdue'' her or whatever)is just wrong. Also that sentence of Kagome ''raping him first'' as if rape is a matter of who does it to who. Some sentences also seemed to imply that he had raped women in the past. He thinks about how most women he's been with were crying and scared. Sorry if I come across as too strong but this is something serious that should never be treated lightly. Not even in fiction. | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2011 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this one and would love to see more of it if you ever feel like adding more. I completely loved Kagome and Inuyasha's interactions. And I was so sure that Inuyasha was going to swoop in and save the day when Kagome was being attacked. You really surprised me there. And I teared up at his reaction to learning that she was dying. But I know you, and I really doubted that you would just let her die so I suspected he would do something to save her, especially when mention of her smelling completely human kept coming up. So Kagome is now a vampire instead of a werewolf. I know she was basically human when Inuyasha turned her, but did any of her wolf characteristics remain? And how will the rest of the wolves treat her now? I know that she won't really be welcome in their community but they won't completely turn on her, right? Even without leaving any real loose ends you still left me with questions and wanting more. That's how you know this is a good story. The only thing missing was the dog ears :D. Congratulations on your first AU Halloween story, it was just as great as your other ones, original and creative. Great job and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. | Reviewed By: animefreak492 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2011 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved this story. I'd read more if you're willing to write it ^_^ | Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2011 19:24 EDT
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loved it! I kinda want an epilogue though | Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 *nsi* On: October 24, 2011 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazing story, and deserves to be more than just a one-shot ^___^ I hope you do more with it sometime soon. |
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