Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Starheart(talking to Relena and Heero):"So, Heero, what do you and Relena think about this fanfic so far?
Heero:"Well, from participating in this fanfic, I think that things went quite well, and I really did enjoy it, don't you agree about it too, Relena?"
Relena:"Yes, I too think that it was enjoyable as well, Heero."
Starheart:"Well thats good to hear, and as for me, I think that this fanfic is very good, and I hope that the author plans to continue it soon, and it seems that Duo isn't here to stop me from saying that, is it that he is still in the hospital recovering from my beatings on him. Heero?"
Heero:"Actually, he is fully recovered, but he is still at the hospital."
Starheart:"Why is that, Heero?"
Relena:"Because Heero and I paid a hot young female nurse to strip dance for him, thus keeping him fully occupied for a long time."
Starheart:"Ahhh, I see, so other than that, what do you and Heero plan to do next, Relena."
Relena(blushing):"Let just say that's a secret between me and Heero."
Heero(unbuttoning Relena's shirt):"I rather show it to him right now, Relena."
-Soon Heero and Relena began to make love right in front of Starheart- |
