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| "An Unforeseen Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: squires On: March 23, 2013 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, please write more soon :) i can't wait to read what happens next! | Reviewed By: ZhongCheng [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2012 18:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed these first chapters! I see no fault with grammar, which is something that can accomplish to ruin the greatest story. Nor is there any trace of the ridiculous text-writing, that people seem to have adopted after someone decided to slaughter and mutilate the beautiful English language. I felt constantly entertained and though each character is well-written and seems very in character, I especially enjoy the beautiful way you portray and illustrate Sesshoumaru, whom I must admit that I simply adore! I sincerely hope that updates will be coming soon! |
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