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| "Husband Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: RSNSI On: April 22, 2013 22:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I know it has been a while since your last update but I just found this story and it is highly unusual but very addicting I would love to see and update sometime in the future. Also a few points of confusion I thought you had kagome as a blonde in the beginning plus a few names seemed to get mixed up here and there. Still I read this beginning to end in one day because it is quite a hooking story. | Title: megh, dont feel like logging in
Reviewed By: Restlessloner1 On: September 19, 2012 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your characters were great and really well developed. So was the plot and I like the story idea too. I don't know how long I stayed up reading this but it has been really good so far. You write in a style that shows your talent could (or most probably already does) exceede the realm of fanfiction writing being that this is a completely (well thought out) origional story with simple character name insertions. I'm surprised you don't have more reviews. Usually I'm a bit to lazy to do even that much but when I saw you had none,it didn't make any sense to me...I look forward to the rest :D |
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