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| "A little drink, a sword and a dress...Roy/Riza" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Mykah On: January 02, 2013 05:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible. Every word, every phrase seemed to be chosen with care. And the humor status was witty and original. It easily possesses the reader with its variation in detail. Overall, you're a very good author. Much appreciated. | Reviewed By: FatalMars [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2012 08:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was pure genius! The words you used were perfectly placed and I ate it up. I loved the shortness of the dialog. To much would have been out of character. And the splash of back story was a amazing. You made some sort of wonderful with this. You had me yearning with each line! The picture was lovely as well and I am glad you saw it! |
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