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| "Blush" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2011 17:23 EST
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Seems to be a decent plot, but you have missing bits most notably the start of the 3rd paragraph, but you have other missing words scattered throughout. Surely has an 'e' in it, you should probably run this through a spelling & grammar checker because that's not the only problem with this, or maybe get a beta who knows what they're doing, a bunch of them don't & miss obvious errors. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2011 21:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh bloody hell...Twilight? LOL, well at least Inuyasha will be on the sparkling demons' side when it comes to their feelings about the wolves! Just imagine if Jacob had won over Edward, there would be hell to pay for poor Kagome with Inuyasha accusing her of preferring Kouga, LOL. This was a cute non-sequitur, thanks for sharing. |
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