| "Ghosts of Christmas" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2011 14:46 EST
Comment/Review:
great! so sad, and dark. i hope you keep writing things like this! check out "Quit playing games with my heart" - back streat boys. part of it goes with this (i think - maybe it's just me) |
Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2011 22:41 EST
Comment/Review:
Good job on this. A very realistic view point for Vegeta. I feel like this could have been even darker but that's a selfish request since it was plenty dark already and I just have a sick mind lol. Good work! |
Title: Ghosts of Christmas
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2011 08:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like it. Is this going to be a continuance? I hope so; with your insight and guidance, I can see a truly meaningful outcome. Looking forward to more... |
