| "Asylum" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Amazing story!
Reviewed By: PerksOfBeingAFanfictionReader On: January 02, 2015 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer! Simply wowing! I know this review is way
later than the last story update, but I just wanted to say that you
are a wonderful author. After this, I'm going to try to find more
of your stories, if you have any. I hope you read this, but it's
okay if it's too late. Well, I hope that you have a great new year!
Thanks for writing this and have a lovely day! Love,
PerksOfBeingAFanfictionReader a.k.a. Katie
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Reviewed By: Jackal437 On: April 30, 2012 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been a while since I reviewed. Thank you for working hard to get the chapters out somewhat consistently. It's frustrating when you forget everything and have to reread or when an author drops a story completely (us readers are greedy little bastards aren't we? "Who cares if the author has a life outside the internet, UPDATE DAMMIT--" XD) On that note, this fic is very well written. The conflicts make the story seem real and everything flows nicely. Also I am amazed sometimes at how imaginative you can be. There have been so many twists I haven't expected (but thoroughly enjoyed). Well.. I am writing this at 4AM so forgive me if nothing I say makes sense. Just know that I appreciate your fanfiction. See ya' |
Reviewed By: Jackal437 On: March 11, 2012 17:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
Welcome back. I hope what delayed you wasn't something terrible. Pretty good imagery you used there with the uh.. monster. Reminded me of the exorcist or something XD spooky. I'm all jumpy now. Good job~ |
Reviewed By: Jackal437 On: February 13, 2012 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry I am not coming up with a pretty little rhyme but I seem to be quite short on time. All joking aside this fic is very good. I am at the end of my seat. No spelling errors from what I've seen so that's a plus and I am becoming attached to your style. It's making me spoiled and picky when looking for other things to read in the stretch between chapters. "Nah this one isn't good enough--" and all that. So without further adieu I will grant you another 10 out of 10. |
Reviewed By: blackcat21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2012 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good hod like the story so far |
Reviewed By: Jackal437 On: February 05, 2012 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't usually comment but hell.. that cliffhanger was a bitch. Hurry up with the next chapter will ya? I'm addicted and I need my fix. |
