| "Beauty Within The Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2017 10:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read every chapter and I could not stop! Your writing style is
very impressive; you convey the emotions of every character very
well, and the progression of the story is keeping me on the edge of
my seat. I do wish that you would continue writing this story until
the end. It has massive potential. Though your last update was in 5
years, and I know what it's like giving up on writing because of a
number of factors. I hope you do continue writing regardless. All
the best to you!
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Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2017 10:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read every chapter and I could not stop! Your writing style is
very impressive; you convey the emotions of every character very
well, and the progression of the story is keeping me on the edge of
my seat. I do wish that you would continue writing this story until
the end. It has massive potential. Though your last update was in 5
years, and I know what it's like giving up on writing because of a
number of factors. I hope you do continue writing regardless. All
the best to you!
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Reviewed By: !! On: July 08, 2012 14:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! Please update soon i cant wait! |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: tattedvegetagal On: May 07, 2012 17:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love the newest chapters, it's got me on the edge of my seat, i would love to know what the secrets are that vegeta is keeping |
Title: AWESOME!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute..hehe..a laser for neutering saiyan!!! poor Radits...Vegeta seems to have a few issues!! |
Title: PERFECT!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2012 13:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! I LOVE THIS!!! XD >‿< ^◡^!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rogue's_Masquerade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2012 00:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying the creativity of this AU story. You have a few grammatical errors but not too many, otherwise I can't wait for another chapter! Please hurry!! |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2012 14:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so am i!!!!!!!!!! i wonder what the gravity room will look like? i hope it won't look like the capsule ship. i love this story, especially with all the details and stuff!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tattedvegetagal On: March 20, 2012 15:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
Love the story so far please update next chapter, i'm sitting on the edge of my chair waiting |
Title: hey
Reviewed By: vegebianca1987 On: February 21, 2012 07:37 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey great story so far I really like it hope you update soon ill b waiting for the next chapter (^_^)V |
