| "The Lost Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Piccolo is green [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2012 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start to a B/V three years fic! I really liked how you started off with a scene of Bulma and her dad at work; it adds a unique flavour to the story, and the amount of detail you added is impressive. I'm really looking forward to reading more, especially (of course) Bulma and Vegeta's budding relationship, but also looking forward to reading about the corporate espionage and how Yamcha deals with everything. Great work! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2012 20:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great start to your fic. I normally read AUs, but I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was well written, and I like your depiction of Bulma's and Vegeta's characters. Looking forward to reading more. |
