| "The Other Woman" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: Continue Please!
Reviewed By: tomorrowperfume [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2013 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mallie! Please finish this fic! I want to tell you that this is not the sort of thing I normally enjoy - I often wonder about the point of writing fanfics where the environment and characters are totally different, as in this case. And you know what? I don't care about that. This is an interesting story with a bit of a twist, and I would like to read the end. I know it's been a while, but please PLEASE finish it up so that I can get closure! |
Reviewed By: cat523 On: May 19, 2012 00:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, but I have to admit that ill remember is my favorite. Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2012 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Dare2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I cannot believe the tension in this chapter!!! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DIE..QUEEN..DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: trugota87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2012 14:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
i want to see what happens! i love the way you make you words flow so well. jealous. |
Reviewed By: Dare2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2012 23:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo I wonder what vegeta has in mind for Bulma. Thanx for the update :) keep it up, can't wait to know what happens next |
Title: fuckin king
Reviewed By: bianca24 On: April 09, 2012 23:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ugh!stupid Vegeta I told him he could only b with Bulma or me hehe!poor Vilma.great chapter thou I hope everything works for the best and please update soon.pleeeeasssssssssse!thank you |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2012 20:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
Grrr! Maron is causing all sorts of problems for our fav couple in both ur fic, isn't she? Lol, still crossing my fingers for a happy ending. Bulma deserves it. Great job on a wonderful chapter! |
Title: The TENSION
Reviewed By: Dare2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2012 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is such a twist, u always manage 2 keep me on the edge of my seat with ur stories! Amazing!!! |
Title: fuckin marron
Reviewed By: bianca24 On: March 31, 2012 11:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
I hope vegetas not stupid enough to go through. That cuz if he does I hope bulma leaves his ass lol |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2012 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so over all I LOVE THIS!!!!! |
Title: Nooo!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2012 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DIE MARRON DIE!!!!!!!! Use that head of yours Vegeta or else I'll make a pic of your hair on fire with bulma pouring gas on it!!!! It might not be great but I'LL DO IT |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2012 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh, vegeta think with ur head, and not ur other organ for once! I hope he doesn't go through with it, because I'm going to jump into the story beat him he does. Lol. |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: dare13 On: March 22, 2012 01:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Amazing keep up the good work! Can't wait to know what happens next LOVE IT!!! |
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