| "The Other Woman" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2012 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so over all I LOVE THIS!!!!! |
Title: Nooo!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2012 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DIE MARRON DIE!!!!!!!! Use that head of yours Vegeta or else I'll make a pic of your hair on fire with bulma pouring gas on it!!!! It might not be great but I'LL DO IT |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2012 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh, vegeta think with ur head, and not ur other organ for once! I hope he doesn't go through with it, because I'm going to jump into the story beat him he does. Lol. |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: dare13 On: March 22, 2012 01:42 EDT
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Amazing keep up the good work! Can't wait to know what happens next LOVE IT!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2012 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! I wonder what the Cardinal has up his sleeve? |
Title: great
Reviewed By: bive24 On: March 21, 2012 23:03 EDT
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Dude finally an update keep up the great work love both of your stories.hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2012 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens. Great chapter! |
Title: nice!!!
Reviewed By: bblovesvegeta On: March 08, 2012 20:13 EST
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Hey great story story but please no sad endings pleaseeee!anyways I love both of ur stories still waiting for an update on the other but keep upthe great job! !!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The affair officially begins. I really hope he doesn't hurt her. I want things to work out for them. Nobody deserves to live in a loveless marriage. There were a few minor mistakes, but it was a great chapter nonetheless. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2012 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They shared a kiss! I'm glad you're taking it slow with their relationship. Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2012 00:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I know a lot of people might like goku and bulma together, but I just don't. Bleh, what do I know? Lol |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2012 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The king is such a male slut, lol. It's a good thing they don't know about stds back then. I'm a lil grossed out, but I get that it was the era they lived in. I think that u should post this on ffn. U prob will get more reviews because more people visit that site. Update soon, oh and don't forget to update vampire prince. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2012 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. Although, I'm quite disgusted with the king's behavior. I know the royals probably all behaved like that. I'm afraid to even guess what he plans on doing with bulma and the other maid. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2012 23:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, is this story going to have a sad ending? If so, I don't know if my little heart can handle it. Lol. I know that our beloved pair will have major obstacles, but I hope in the end, they'll be together. |
Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2012 23:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so excited that you decided to write another fic. I love historical AUs. Looking forward to reading more. |
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