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Title: Please continue to write
Reviewed By: Amber1188-99 On: June 28, 2015 09:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author, please please dont abandon this fanfic. I have read
countless fanfictions, and I am quite in love with the story you
have created. You have put a new spin on two of my favorite
characters. You have gone deeper into Vegeta's dark insane persona
than I have ever seen before, the character you have written seems
more true to the madness we saw existed in Majin Vegeta, and you
have done it in a new exciting way that is so thoroughly
enthralling. I love that you have made Bulma a stronger character,
that not only is she looking to save him, but has successfully done
so in your story which IVe rarely seen from other authors. Your
Bulma takes the adventurous, can do genious the character posses
and puts it into an action laced storyline. You have made her
stong, yet still vulnerable to the madness. Your writing is
beautiful, and I would love to see the out come of this tale.
Please please update
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Reviewed By: WJS Nominations On: September 28, 2014 23:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
On be half of the 2014 Semi-annual WJS awards, I am proud to
announce that your fanfiction/fanart has been nominated by your
fans and will be in the running for a 1st, 2nd, or 3rd place spot
on our community and website. 'Reciprocity' is Nominated for 'Best
Bulma Portrayal Fanfiction' Our website can be located at w w w
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running! -WJS Nominations
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Reviewed By: Bronzelover1 On: September 08, 2013 12:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! Its very unpredictable and thats good. I really want to read more chapters!! |
Reviewed By: Kitty123456 On: August 18, 2013 08:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm a big nag...sorry. Here it comes: It has been two months already!! *Cries uncontrollably* |
Reviewed By: Rogue's masquerade On: August 06, 2013 08:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please tell me the next chapter is coming soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: kitty12345 On: July 29, 2013 11:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
I just keep checking if you've updated yet. |
Reviewed By: Kitty123456 On: July 28, 2013 02:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
I desperately want to know what is going to happen next. How will Vegeta react?!! |
Title: Holy Crap
Reviewed By: Lechick On: July 05, 2013 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking amazing. This is truly a fun and twisted read. I have read far more DBZ fanfics than I will ever admit and this is one of the few times where I honestly have no idea what's going to happen next. More importantly however, I desperately want to find out. The writing style is truly at the professional level and descriptions of the inner emotions border on poetic. My only minor gripe would be a bit of ooc-ness of Vegeta in the earlier chapters (a bit too emotional). This far deep into the story however I have forgiven it. I sincerely hope I get to read this story completed. Wonderful work. |
Reviewed By: jordansmom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2013 13:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luvin the story. plzzzzz continue to update. |
Reviewed By: kitty12345 On: June 20, 2013 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to rate you :) |
Reviewed By: kitty12345 On: June 20, 2013 11:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is just a fantastic fic! I was really dissapointed when I found out that there wasn;t another chapter written yet. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: May 13, 2013 18:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! That was sooooo hot and sexy! |
Title: OMG HOT
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2013 23:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG SO HOT AND VERY ENJOYABLE THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THE UPDATE BEST STORY OF YOURS SO FAR |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2013 03:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i had to tread it in one sitting wow very powerful writing hope you will finish this one day thanks |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2012 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! |
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