| "Reciprocity" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitty123456 On: July 28, 2013 02:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
I desperately want to know what is going to happen next. How will Vegeta react?!! |
Title: Holy Crap
Reviewed By: Lechick On: July 05, 2013 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking amazing. This is truly a fun and twisted read. I have read far more DBZ fanfics than I will ever admit and this is one of the few times where I honestly have no idea what's going to happen next. More importantly however, I desperately want to find out. The writing style is truly at the professional level and descriptions of the inner emotions border on poetic. My only minor gripe would be a bit of ooc-ness of Vegeta in the earlier chapters (a bit too emotional). This far deep into the story however I have forgiven it. I sincerely hope I get to read this story completed. Wonderful work. |
Reviewed By: jordansmom [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2013 13:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luvin the story. plzzzzz continue to update. |
Reviewed By: kitty12345 On: June 20, 2013 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to rate you :) |
Reviewed By: kitty12345 On: June 20, 2013 11:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is just a fantastic fic! I was really dissapointed when I found out that there wasn;t another chapter written yet. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: May 13, 2013 18:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! That was sooooo hot and sexy! |
Title: OMG HOT
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2013 23:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG SO HOT AND VERY ENJOYABLE THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THE UPDATE BEST STORY OF YOURS SO FAR |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2013 03:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i had to tread it in one sitting wow very powerful writing hope you will finish this one day thanks |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2012 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2012 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a really great character development and your story has some great and funny moments! |
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2012 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what the offer is. Lovely story by the way. No mushiness or exaggerated angst. |
Reviewed By: 4869872 On: August 16, 2012 22:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm loving it so far. Please kept going. |
Reviewed By: mbhsgacvhu On: June 11, 2012 15:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These are five amazing first chapters. I'm curious to see what comes up next!! You clearly are a talented writer and I'm so glad I discovered this! And this story should really get more attention. Hope to read more from you soon. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2012 01:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see where you're going with this story. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2012 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice start to your fic. I usually read AUs, but so far so good. U should consider publishing this on ffn. Update soon please. |
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