"Sakura's Long Weekend" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: angel On: January 26, 2002 20:39 CST Comment/Review: I like this story write more!!!!
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Reviewed By: no one On: December 18, 2001 09:18 CST Comment/Review: The story is really good,please keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: krimsonkiller On: September 01, 2001 22:49 CDT Comment/Review:
I'd run if I was kero.
My $0.02:Write more your good at it. |
Reviewed By: Duece of Spades On: October 21, 2001 19:17 CDT Comment/Review: It's a good idea, and you began it well, but it's too jumpy. It doesn't flow quite right, but other than that, it's really good. Please keep writing. |