| "Trailer Park Pants" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Dryad Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 20:31 CDT
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yeah i know its so ri-frickin-diculously OOC and all these random things that wouldnt normally happen happen, SO ........^^; hey its my story who said it had to be exact? and yesssss.....plenty of rio in chapter 4...maybe more than u want...@_@ but garu sure doesnt mind! lol catch ya later oh yah its rill i need to cahnge that ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Kitzaku-san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins and pushes up non-existant glasses* Very interesting...
Congrats! This is the first fic I've reviewed since I moved from FF.Net to here! ^.^;
Anyway, yes! Go Rio/Garu! Even if... Rio isn't in it much, I still liked. And about all I can really say is it's very...well.... interesting.
Anyway, the lower scores on the ratings are because the characters are a little OOC. And I think someone may have already mentioned these but...
1)Why would Zero and Kizna be on GIS? Unless of course GIS docked at GOA. Even so, would Candidates and pilots really converse?
2)"Nurse Fehn"... would that be Rill by any chance? 'The white-cloaked Madonna?' Or is it one of the nurse twins?
.. .yeah, that's my rant for now. ^.^; It's still funny though, and that dream sequence was very creative.
~Kanpei!
Kitzaku-san |
Reviewed By: Dryad Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 15:52 CDT
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*whoops* oh yeah, that's right...I POSTED THE THIRD CHAPTER!!*laughs insanely* |
Reviewed By: dryad chick On: September 06, 2002 22:01 CDT
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*blows nose loudly* i want to post chapter 3 so bad...BUT I CANT UWAAAHHH!!! *clings to zell plushy* |
Reviewed By: dryad chick On: September 04, 2002 18:56 CDT
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arggggg....my computer just got XP and it frigged it up...so i was going to post the third chapter secretively, BUT...
word doesnt work -.- w/e...just be patient, my...*checks info*...14 readers ^^; ah ha ha...LATER
-D/Chick* |
Reviewed By: dryad chick On: September 04, 2002 18:53 CDT
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*huggles garu and glares at Night* grrrrr.... |
Reviewed By: Night On: September 02, 2002 19:31 CDT
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Poor Garu, poor, poor, Garu.
*huggles Rio* MINE. MINE. |
Reviewed By: Dryad Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 23:36 CDT
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*grins yes i know i am crazy muahahahahahaaaaaa!!! |
Reviewed By: kio87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2002 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao what are you ON!!?!?!!?! ha ha ha i love it! ^.^ where the hell do you get your idea's they are soo good! now i will never be able to look at Rio and Garu the same way! ::sob:: oh well. very good! |
Reviewed By: it's blondie! On: December 04, 2002 21:08 CST
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i didn't understand the whole rating part so i just left it blank! hehe i like trailer park pants! hehehehehehe, the part where ernest is straigtening his hair and puts shine stuff in his hair, reminds me of something i did a few weeks ago, except i totally screwed up! ernest has skinny legs! like kirk! hardy har har..... |
