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| "Willing Slave II -- Corazon" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
more soon KC or do you want me to use this paddle I have?! | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: August 13, 2002 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, forget whatever I said about having a short sequel. This series is too good to just wrap up in a few pages.
Anyhow, great start! Hope to see more soon. Very soon. | Reviewed By: Dazzler On: August 12, 2002 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! you scared me with that saiyan stuff at the beginning! Great, you finally got the sequel out! I'm not a big fan of 13x5,actually, I can barely stand it, but I love the chemistry between Wufei and Treize the way you write those two, they seem perfect together. You have great writing talent and a great ability to give depth to characters, even ones that I could care less about. Will you ever write more about Treize, Zechs, and Noin's past? Well, I bothered you enough. Oh! you should keep the interaction you have with the characters at the beginning. It's funny just write more Treize and Zechs in the opening dialogue. | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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