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"Willing Slave II -- Corazon" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ]
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 Reviewed By: Amanda chan  On: December 25, 2003 16:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that I've found the sequel to "willing slave". Yeh and I'm glad to say that I enjoyed this one as much as the "Willing slave". Hoppe to see more of your wonderful fics here.
 Reviewed By: black beauty  On: November 28, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sighs! Great story. Awesome sequel. I can't believe it took me this long to find it! The ending was really cute since Une just kept whining. Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2003 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was very good! I luv this story and the one b4 this one! They were both great! You're a wonderful writer!
 Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwww!!! The ending was perfect!! *Is teary* I'm sad that such a good epic is over at last, and I was so hoping that there'd be more! Oh well! All good stories must end... *sniff*
 Reviewed By: lime  On: April 03, 2003 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Sugoi!! i love your writing, please update soon ^.~
 Reviewed By: chaotic kitty  On: March 22, 2003 07:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEY!!!! No cliffhangers, this is getting good.. by the way how's the group therepy going with the boys?!?!?!
 Reviewed By: Zslyth  On: March 09, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the rating run as 10 as the highest, right?
anywho....

****
Duo could feel it coming, just as he could feel everything in the room for a moment, but he only had the strength to stop three swords. He tensed and thanked God for the veil that hid his wince. "Wufei!"

Wufei shouted.

Duo fell.
*****
~glare~
~glare~
you just had to stop there, didn't you?
~glare~
i've been reading your story since 1030 last night, stopped at 1 this morning to sleep a little, and continued to read at 10 am. and you STOPED!!!
~Heero death glare~




*what she is trying to say is that she wants you to continue the story. she really like it!!! so more please before she goes crazy(er)*
~boinks voice~
shut up. but he's right...more? please? soooooooon?
 Reviewed By: star  On: January 07, 2003 13:47 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please write more I really need to know what happens please!!! I can't take the not knowing much longer!!!
 Reviewed By: Chii  On: November 18, 2002 01:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read Willing Slave and I loved it! Please post the next part of this story soon!!!!
 Reviewed By: Ari Maxwell  On: November 17, 2002 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
When are you going to be updating?!? And Matiemeais script is actually a lot diffrent then yours, i should know, i memorized the hole movie, expecialy her and relena's part. i love that part!!^-^
 Reviewed By: Someone  On: October 30, 2002 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Be nice. Now, we've had a lot of yaoi, and hints at yuri. C'mon, I think it would be cool to have some Relena+Dorthy action. Or Sally and Une. Pleaseeeeee!!!!!!!! I'll give you a cool idea: Duo is has powers, maybe he's related to wufei, if only distantly?
 Reviewed By: Lemon Princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 01, 2002 07:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil, evil kitty cat! To leave us all hanging like that!! *_* I just got through re-reading Willing Slave (yes, all of it) and now I'm ready to read the sequel!! You have to write more soon!! I can't stand not knowing what will happen to Duo!! *sigh* Yes, I know real life gets in the way of writing. It happens to me, too. So I'm going to try and be patient... ^_^
 Reviewed By: PATTY 40  On: September 26, 2002 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY THE BEST I JUST WISH THE AUTHER WOULD COTINUE PLEASE
 Reviewed By: Grevola [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2002 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Both the first, and the sequal. I'm glad that I will be able to continue reading it!
I just wanted to say that Treiz makes a cute panda, and your characters are wonderful as usual.
Grevola aka G'Vola
 Reviewed By: Nitelyfe  On: September 13, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the way you integrated the elements of the series with your own world here. I've been waiting for the sequel for ages and ages and I'm thrilled with with what you have so far. Course, if the next chapter doesn't come out soon enough, we'll have to release the rabid pikachus to go after you. ^.~
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