| "Soul Of The Night" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2013 04:43 EST
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Good chappie. *waits impatiently for the next* |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2013 06:44 EDT
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Yay two new chappies x3 I hope the next one comes soon, i love this story. I hope they all make it safe back in their time. |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2012 08:52 EST
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“Is mom alright?” Bakura scratched the back of his head. “Yeah, your mother....I think the baby is kicking your mother’s bladder.” “Oh,” Robbie and Aten said quietly. Somehow i had to grin at this scene. I think Robbies and Atens expressions were priceless. xD *waits impatiently for a new chappie* :3 |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2012 07:03 EDT
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I wonder, did Aten forget he waited for Ryou after he died? I'm quite happy that Bakuras little son comes back to him. :) Hopefully they all survive that trouble lol. Could it be that Marik killed Malik? Or someone else? When he can call his monsters it could be possible. Interesting thought.. Please keep writing. :) |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2012 05:48 EDT
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I like the new chappie and the kids too *waits for the next chappie* x3 |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2012 10:38 EDT
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I like this chappie x3 I was just a little confused which Bakura was meant at some parts. I hope Ryous baby is ok and Marik and Malik snap out of this brainwashing soon. |
Reviewed By: BB On: July 13, 2012 20:17 EDT
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I must be very dense to not notice till now that this was a time travel ficXD I completly skipped over the summary the first time cause I was so excited to see there was a new fic from you.So it looks like everyones back in the past,not just a few people like I was thinking.And back farther then I thought,didnt think they go as far back as Bakura being a child, a teen sure but not a child.I have to wonder how all this well affect his future by the time everythings over.So many possibilities;)Until next time! |
Reviewed By: yamialex On: July 04, 2012 21:37 EDT
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OMFG YAY YOUR BACK WOOT WOOT i'm so happy.... i thought the worse :( but now your back... and this is going to be epic please keep writing |
Reviewed By: BB On: June 18, 2012 05:19 EDT
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I just decided to re-read RTP cause I cant sleep and am bored only to find it was partially rewritten and complete.I really thought you had quit;I'm glad to see that isnt the case.So everyones alive,Ryous pregnant(got to say,not expecting that)and it appears Yami is the only threat again.I cant wait to see where you take this series:)Welcome back and until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2012 03:49 EDT
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I'm quite happy that you rewrote the ending of Return to paradise. ^^" So some of them don't know Kailani is Setos kid. I wonder when they will find out *g* This story begins interesting, i wonder what will happen next. |
Reviewed By: xNozomix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2012 07:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay a new fanfic from you x3 I'm happy that you decided to continue your stories. This chappie is very interesting, i'm curious whats coming next. I hope Ryous baby will be Ilthien. x3 It's just a little confusing, so Ryou can still be pregnant.. Why didn't it happen earlier? Or is it only possible after the incident with Yami? Hope to read more from you soon Greetings~ Nozomi |
