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| "Neapolitan Sky." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Jam Jar Cat On: July 06, 2012 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is a very unique b/v! I loved the film 'The Help' and I am loving this fiction. So curious to see what's going to happen. I'm loving this version of vegeta- rather OC, but of course he has to be lol. If your looking for other inspiration, I recommend the film: 'The Secret life of Bees', it's also based around this era in America, and is just as moving. Please update soon!! This honestly is one of the most interesting DBZ fanfictions I've read in a long time. Xxx | Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2012 16:42 EDT
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Well, I had a very nice review written, and the browser ate it! Damn SOB... Suffice it to say that I really enjoyed this chapter, and, if I can remember what I wrote (ditzy me), I'll post it, again. XD | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2012 00:00 EDT
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Thanks for the quick update. Looking forward to the next chapter. | Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2012 14:07 EDT
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I'm happy to see this fic here on this site. I will prob continue reading this fic here, but no worries, I'll review on both sites. | Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2012 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this on FF. net, and I was happy to follow you, and your fanfic, over to this site. This was an excellent chapter. I'm thrilled that there's a slight spark between these two future lovers..these two belong together, no matter what the story setting..or universe that they happen to be in. Nicely written, and, very, VERY believable..these were (and, sadly, still are) the very same attitudes that thrive in the deep south of N. America. Thankfully, the beliefs aren't nearly as prevalent now as they were then. Lol, if the actual people involved had been Saiyan, however, I'm certain that this country of mine would have an entirely different outlook, (and landscape, heehee). I'm truly excited about any future updates. I will read them faithfully. :D | Title: Great!!
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2012 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated yayy!! Best chapter so far!!! Finally BV interaction, but I was so annoyed with her for declining his hand first time around. She needs to make up her mind about how she feels about the sayains seems like she keeps changing her mind, although it was finally nice to see her talk back to Juu it was her fault!!! I think I'll be reading it on here from know on just incase something happens to FF but ill post this review on FF too, you deserve the reviews this story is great!!!! |
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