| "Kurayami no Naka de Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: keep writing!!
Reviewed By: halfblood On: July 07, 2012 15:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
i'm sorry that you are losing motivation with this fanfic! i really like it and have been reading it for a while. PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING IT BEFORE THE STORY IS DONE!!! ive been waiting with bated breath for updates..please finish the story!!! |
Title: please write more soon!
Reviewed By: akari_h (again) On: June 24, 2012 12:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
....cliffhanger...PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! its killing me.. |
Title: wonderful story
Reviewed By: akari_h On: June 24, 2012 08:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really been enjoying this fanfic, I started it yesterday and stayed up all night to read it. I definitely wondered if some of it came from experience-the way kagome felt seemed very familiar to me as I have been in a somewhat similar relationship. (On a side note) I'm relieved to hear that you have the support of the shelter and that you're taking care to make sure he can't track you. Please make sure not to let your guard down, I did a couple times and I wish I hadnt-it made it much harder for me than it could have been. Hang in there! If youre going through anything like I was, I can tell you it gets better from here. (Back to the review) I am really enjoying the way youre potraying Inuyasha and Izayoi - I always wished the manga had told us more about her, and though I understand that this is an alternate universe fic so it is not required to stay true to the original characters, I think youre doing a great (and very believable) job with character development in general! i dont feel like I'm reading about people I don't know - I just feel that they're familiar people in a different environment/situation. Please keep writing if you have a chance, this is a great fic - I haven't given any fanfiction longer than 4 pages a full read-through in over 4 years...so this is truly high praise! |
Reviewed By: Ayaa On: June 23, 2012 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been absolutely riveted to this story! Please do continue to update it! I understand that you are going through hard times, so get things taken care of at home and stay safe, but be sure to finish this story somewhere in there! lol. |
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