| "Kurayami no Naka de Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Dark_lady_69 *nsi* On: June 20, 2013 02:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please update TT-TT been waiting soooo long... |
Reviewed By: RSNSI On: April 13, 2013 21:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
Looking for an update keeping my eye on this. Also just a bit of criticism you might want a proofreader for you story there are a lot of typos improper tense and repeated sentences I still like the story but sometimes it's a little hard to follow with the typos. Like when they leave the police station after miroku is released you have rin riding in two different limos...which doesn't work |
Reviewed By: Kai^_^ On: September 14, 2012 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story!!! You have a gift, keep doing what you love. |
Title: good story, cliffhangers are rough though...
Reviewed By: IrisJ On: August 03, 2012 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really good. i read it all in one sitting...well, one long sitting...and i read your post about completing the fic. please complete it as quickly as you can - i know i cant wait to find out what happens! you are an extremely talented writer, and i look forward to reading more from you! |
Title: please update soon!
Reviewed By: Kira24 On: July 25, 2012 13:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
im loving this story and the last several chapters have been so suspenseful! please keep writing and update as soon as you can. i was literally gripping my chair with suspense i was so into this fic! im sure your life is very hectic, especially with a child, but if you have a moment or two to write, im sure im not the only one here who would appreciate it! |
Reviewed By: m On: July 21, 2012 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic!!! I hope Inu beats the crap outta that friggin spider!! Keep up the awesome work!!!! |
Reviewed By: Glily On: July 16, 2012 21:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
Not sure if you are read reviews on Mediaminer, but I am still interested in your story. :-) I'm enjoying it so far, keep the plot rolling please! |
Reviewed By: Genie666 On: July 14, 2012 18:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for the mistakes, but I think you got the gist of it. Next chapter pllllleeeeaasssseee! |
Reviewed By: Genie666 On: July 14, 2012 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually review fanfiction stories, but today I'm making an exception. I enjoyed this story SO MUCH!!!! You gave this story so muxh depth. Also, I took the time to reas your AN and I'm sorry about your personal struggles and I'm happy that you've moved on to better things :) However, please take the time to finish the story because this is the first time in months that a story has kept me hooked for more than 30 seconds. Honestly, you have talent. Keep it up!! I'm now hooked to this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Cheers |
Title: ahhh keep writing!!
Reviewed By: shattereddreams On: July 13, 2012 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good!!!! please write moremoremore!!!!! 0.0 8D i can't wait for the next update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2012 14:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love this story please update soon!!! |
Title: Yo :D
Reviewed By: CityOfFallenAshes (City) On: July 10, 2012 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say I would review on Fanfiction.net, but I was too lazy to log on. Anyhow, this is one of my favorite stories so far. The point of my review anyhow is... Holy. S***. How dare Koharu press charges on Miroku D:< Poor Miroku! |
Reviewed By: inuamante81 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2012 07:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story. You need to finish it. I wanna see Naraku get his ass handed to himself. Though I could due with this story being completed more quickly. Please update soon and good luck with ur daughter. |
Title: not bored with the story!!
Reviewed By: akari_h On: July 08, 2012 17:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not bored with the story! please keep writing it!! its so good! and i agree with avid_kurayami_reader_ about how it would be nice if you could update a lot even if it means the chapters are a fair bit shorter! |
Title: finish the story please!
Reviewed By: avid_kurayami_reader_ On: July 08, 2012 08:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
please finish the story! i'm really enjoying it. i did feel like some of the stuff with the band of seven characters dragged a bit, though...im not as interested in very serious character development with them, so if you wanted to make it quicker for you, i guess id say skip intense character development for them! i hope you keep writing this and will post as regularly as you can...even if the chapters are much shorter, its fine, its just nice to have bits to read more often :) i understand that youre busy though and have other stuff to do! >. |
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