| "Kurayami no Naka de Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: please update soon!
Reviewed By: Kira24 On: July 25, 2012 13:28 EDT
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im loving this story and the last several chapters have been so suspenseful! please keep writing and update as soon as you can. i was literally gripping my chair with suspense i was so into this fic! im sure your life is very hectic, especially with a child, but if you have a moment or two to write, im sure im not the only one here who would appreciate it! |
Reviewed By: m On: July 21, 2012 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic!!! I hope Inu beats the crap outta that friggin spider!! Keep up the awesome work!!!! |
Reviewed By: Glily On: July 16, 2012 21:19 EDT
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Not sure if you are read reviews on Mediaminer, but I am still interested in your story. :-) I'm enjoying it so far, keep the plot rolling please! |
Reviewed By: Genie666 On: July 14, 2012 18:05 EDT
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Sorry for the mistakes, but I think you got the gist of it. Next chapter pllllleeeeaasssseee! |
Reviewed By: Genie666 On: July 14, 2012 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually review fanfiction stories, but today I'm making an exception. I enjoyed this story SO MUCH!!!! You gave this story so muxh depth. Also, I took the time to reas your AN and I'm sorry about your personal struggles and I'm happy that you've moved on to better things :) However, please take the time to finish the story because this is the first time in months that a story has kept me hooked for more than 30 seconds. Honestly, you have talent. Keep it up!! I'm now hooked to this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Cheers |
Title: ahhh keep writing!!
Reviewed By: shattereddreams On: July 13, 2012 23:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good!!!! please write moremoremore!!!!! 0.0 8D i can't wait for the next update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2012 14:42 EDT
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Love this story please update soon!!! |
Title: Yo :D
Reviewed By: CityOfFallenAshes (City) On: July 10, 2012 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say I would review on Fanfiction.net, but I was too lazy to log on. Anyhow, this is one of my favorite stories so far. The point of my review anyhow is... Holy. S***. How dare Koharu press charges on Miroku D:< Poor Miroku! |
Reviewed By: inuamante81 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2012 07:21 EDT
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This is a great story. You need to finish it. I wanna see Naraku get his ass handed to himself. Though I could due with this story being completed more quickly. Please update soon and good luck with ur daughter. |
Title: not bored with the story!!
Reviewed By: akari_h On: July 08, 2012 17:00 EDT
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I'm not bored with the story! please keep writing it!! its so good! and i agree with avid_kurayami_reader_ about how it would be nice if you could update a lot even if it means the chapters are a fair bit shorter! |
Title: finish the story please!
Reviewed By: avid_kurayami_reader_ On: July 08, 2012 08:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
please finish the story! i'm really enjoying it. i did feel like some of the stuff with the band of seven characters dragged a bit, though...im not as interested in very serious character development with them, so if you wanted to make it quicker for you, i guess id say skip intense character development for them! i hope you keep writing this and will post as regularly as you can...even if the chapters are much shorter, its fine, its just nice to have bits to read more often :) i understand that youre busy though and have other stuff to do! >. |
Title: keep writing!!
Reviewed By: halfblood On: July 07, 2012 15:51 EDT
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i'm sorry that you are losing motivation with this fanfic! i really like it and have been reading it for a while. PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING IT BEFORE THE STORY IS DONE!!! ive been waiting with bated breath for updates..please finish the story!!! |
Title: please write more soon!
Reviewed By: akari_h (again) On: June 24, 2012 12:43 EDT
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....cliffhanger...PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! its killing me.. |
Title: wonderful story
Reviewed By: akari_h On: June 24, 2012 08:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really been enjoying this fanfic, I started it yesterday and stayed up all night to read it. I definitely wondered if some of it came from experience-the way kagome felt seemed very familiar to me as I have been in a somewhat similar relationship. (On a side note) I'm relieved to hear that you have the support of the shelter and that you're taking care to make sure he can't track you. Please make sure not to let your guard down, I did a couple times and I wish I hadnt-it made it much harder for me than it could have been. Hang in there! If youre going through anything like I was, I can tell you it gets better from here. (Back to the review) I am really enjoying the way youre potraying Inuyasha and Izayoi - I always wished the manga had told us more about her, and though I understand that this is an alternate universe fic so it is not required to stay true to the original characters, I think youre doing a great (and very believable) job with character development in general! i dont feel like I'm reading about people I don't know - I just feel that they're familiar people in a different environment/situation. Please keep writing if you have a chance, this is a great fic - I haven't given any fanfiction longer than 4 pages a full read-through in over 4 years...so this is truly high praise! |
Reviewed By: Ayaa On: June 23, 2012 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been absolutely riveted to this story! Please do continue to update it! I understand that you are going through hard times, so get things taken care of at home and stay safe, but be sure to finish this story somewhere in there! lol. |
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