| "Distraction" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2013 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great one-shot! It's been so long since I've actively read on Mediaminer and clearly I've been missing some good fics. I've been a vet for 12 years, and this is some great B/V get together fanfiction. Very believable, as mentioned, very in character. And you have a great prose. Bravo! I'd like to check out some more. |
Reviewed By: lct105580 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2012 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic writing I think this story was very plausible and had some really great moments especially when Bulma asked him to stay |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2012 02:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this was just amazing! My eyes are tearing up from the believability of this fic. Just two lonely people...so tender and sad. Bravo! |
